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My names is Kornelia I'm eleven years old and my hobby is drawing animal,climbing and go rollerblading. I like it because it's exciting. I also like to collecting semi-precious stones them for a few years now.I like my stones because they different shapes and colours. But my favorite hobby is swimming. Swimming gives me great pleasure.
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27.10.2017 (06:05)
My name is Kornelia and I am eleven years old. My hobbies are drawing animals, climbing and rollerblading. I like it because it's fun and exciting. I also like to collect semi-precious stones for a few years now. I like my stones because they are all different shapes and colours. But the hobby I like the most is swimming. Swimming relaxes me and it's a good exercise.
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